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Post by Raikage on Thu Jul 10, 2014 11:40 am

[Hagane]
Clan Description :: The Hagane clan are a small people in the large village of Kumogakure, compared to most other clans, their population numbers are 1/20th of the average. Very few males are born in this clan, and assume a lesser role than females. The females of this clan are dominant in personalities and responsibilities. Anatomy wise, they are all well gifted in their own sexes. The few men are well toned, muscular and possess a strength above the average person. The females also possess this strength, but their bodies are extremely beautiful and "gifted" in the womanly charms area. The clan usually possesses a dark blue hair color and silver eyes, but occasionally a member will be born with a different hair color. The Hagane are a proud people even if the are small, people born in their clan that look different are shunned and ostracized. Since there are so few males in the clan, polygamy is widely accepted amongst most members and the woman are quite frisky. Mostly the females of this clan lean to liking women more than men because they are so used to women in their clan... men are seen more of a tool to use for reproducing more offspring for the clan.
The clan's skin is naturally more dense than the average person, this is due to their main source of food. They eat metals for their clan ability, their bone structure is more resilient and their teeth can bite down of steel as if it were tough bread. Eating metal is not fully necessary for their clan element, but it aids greatly in chakra conversion if they already have a high source of metal in their body.

Clan History ::
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The Hagane were once a large clan, they were common among the villages of Kumogakure- their ability to manipulate metals was very valuable in the village and they were paid handsomely for building things in the village as well as making armor and weapons. Out of all this, their pride was their downfall, they were envied by many other people in the village, as well as other villages. The need for their metal manipulation gave them a false sense of greater importance and superiority; they soon became despised by even their own fellow villagers and were too blind to see where their clan's pride was taking them.
The Hagane often offered to be the "spear-head" of assaults for Kumogakure, but due to the need of their metal manipulation and their overgrown pride, Kumogakure always declined the Hagane's offer. Normally, being told that you were too important to be let die so easily would be a compliment- but the Hagane only saw this as disrespect. Acting independently from Kumogakure, the Hagane clan took part in the war 35 years ago- they sided with Konohagakure and Kirigakure. They believed that Iwagakure could pose a threat to their village and offered to take the "spear-head" of Konohagalure's forces. Konoha gratefully allowed the Hagane to lead their forces out and turned a blind eye as the metal clan wreaked havoc on the front-lines of the enemies forces.
They made a great dent in the frontlines, but then the reinforcements came in and crushed the Hagane while the were weak and tired from the fighting. Konohagakure and Iwagakure took up the fight then, but it was already too late; only a handful of the Hagane clan survived the war and none of them had been able to walk away unscathed. Besides their physical ailments, a deep hatred grew in their hearts for Konohagakure and Iwagakure. Their pride had been bruised by the two allied villages letting them receive the punishment of Iwagakure's reinforcements- their choice to turn a blind eye while the Hagane clan was massacred and weakened their enemies was an acceptable action.
Their pride defeated and replaced with hatred, the survivors returned to their village, wounded and ashamed- their village welcomed them back, but not in a friendly way. They were humiliated for years after and were frowned upon as extremists; their numbers were so few that they were easily picked on by other clans. The demand for their metal manipulation became less and less as their infamy grew more and more. By the time of the 10 year Reconciliation occurred, the Hagane had been all but forgotten.

[Kinton]
Kekkei Genkai Name :: Kinton(Metal Release)
Kekkei Genkai Description :: Kinton is a bloodline ability that allows the members of the Hagane clan to manipulate metals in several forms. The KKG of this clan is in their very blood, granting them the ability to eat metals, become metals, bend metals with their hands and even from a distance. The most common form of this ability is through one's self- becoming metal and shaping their body into various weapons; advanced forms of this are manipulating metals with their will and not their bodies. A clan member's ability to eat and manipulate metal depends on their shinobi rank- as this is what defines ones personal progress. Being that this clan eats metals, they are unphased by things such a lead poisoning and the likes; both their skin and immune system is more resilient than an average person's. Each member of this clan's KKG automatically produces deposits of the metal they eat beneath their skin, this storage allows for use of metal release of jutsu on large scales. They use the chakra in their body to aid in the metal deposit replenishment so that even in combat, they can remain fully functional. In this sense, their KKG ability can be compared to the Kaguya's ability to enhance their body's calcium to manipulate bones.
Genin: Metal hardness of 1
Chuunin: Metal hardness of 2
SPC/Jounin: Metal hardness of 4
ANBU Black-Ops: Metal hardness of 6
Sannin: Metal hardness of 8
Kage: Metal hardness of 10

Kekkei Genkai Techniques ::
D Rank:

Jutsu Name::Tansetsu no Jutsu (Forge Weilding technique)Sharp
Jutsu Type::Offensive/Supplementary
Jutsu Affinity:: Kinton
Jutsu Rank ::D
Jutsu Description::Using the Metal Release KKG, the Hagane clan can generate any sword, dagger or bladed weapon.(Maximum of 20ft length & 5ft width)(The weapon/size must be specified in individual jutsu- such as a Forge Wielding technique: Sword from their body; whether being separate from their body or part of their body. This jutsu can also be used to repair other broken or damaged weapons. Granted the weapons are limited to how well one can manipulate the metals.

Jutsu Name::Tansetsu no Jutsu (Forge Weilding technique)Blunt
Jutsu Type::Offensive/Supplementary
Jutsu Affinity:: Kinton
Jutsu Rank ::D
Jutsu Description::Using the Metal Release KKG, the Hagane clan can generate any hammer, chains, fans or flat weapon.(Maximum of 20ft length & 5ft width) from their body; whether being separate from their body or part of their body. This jutsu can also be used to repair other broken or damaged weapons. Granted the weapons are limited to how well one can manipulate the metals.

B Rank:

Jutsu Name::Kinton Bunshin no Jutsu(Metal Release Clone Technique)
Jutsu Type::Supplementary
Jutsu Affinity:: Kinton
Jutsu Rank ::B
Jutsu Description::Using the Metal Release KKG, the member of the Hagane clan creates clones of themselves made out of metal. The increased defense the metal bodies provide, make them harder to destroy. The clones are capable of performing Kinton jutsu only because their body is made of metal themselves and can manipulate it into simple forms of weapons and provides a base for other attacks through the original user.

S Rank:

Jutsu Name::Melted Sensation
Jutsu Type::Offensive/Supplementary
Jutsu Affinity:: Kinton
Jutsu Rank ::S
Jutsu Description::Using the Metal Release KKG along with the Katon element to melt the metal stored in their body, the member of the Hagane clan heats their metals to the melting point and then casts the liquid metal at people or objects. Once the liquid metal lands, it hardens and creates a metal cocoon that only a Hagane of S Rank or high temperature flame can melt.


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Re: Hagane Clan

Post by Daisuke on Fri Jul 11, 2014 2:42 am

What TWO elements are fused to create Kinton? I'm assuming one is Earth. Also I forgot to add this onto the template at first but could you add Jutsu Rank to your techniques. The Template has been updated if you'd like to review it.

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The most common form of this ability is through one's self- becoming metal and shaping their body into various weapons;
This seems similar to Suigetsu's Hydration Technique. You'll have to expand on this ability using the Jutsu Template. It'll immediately be an S-Rank/Forbidden technique thus will have limited use and negative affects upon the user. Can't have the user turning into metal anytime they wanted, it'd make them virtually indestructable. You may however have shaping limbs into various weapons, but only as a seperate lower leveled techique.

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Genin: Capable of eating/manipulating forms up to Silver
Chuunin: Capable of eating/manipulating forms up to Bronze
SPC/Jounin: Capable of eating/manipulating forms up to Platinum
ANBU Black-Ops: Capable of eating/manipulating forms up to Titanium
Sannin: Capable of eating/manipulating forms up to Hardened Steel
Kage: Capable of eating/manipulating forms up to Tungsten Carbide
Why do you have specific types of metal for each rank instead of just keeping it simple ie. Can manipulate Metal, the more chakra imbued the stronger the metal? Is it just for aesthetic reasons? Cause I see you need to be higher ranked to use Silver but for Bronze which is physically stronger you only need to be genin.

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Jutsu Name::Tansetsu no Jutsu (Forge Weilding technique)
Jutsu Type::Offensive/Supplementary
Jutsu Affinity:: Kinton
Jutsu Description::Using the Metal Release KKG, the Hagane clan can generate any weapon and armor shape and size(Maximum of 20ft length & 5ft width) from their body; whether being separate from their body or part of their body. This jutsu can also be used to repair other broken or damaged weapons. Granted the weapons are limited to how well one can manipulate the metals.
I'll allow being able to produce metal but it'll be better and more practical if it has to be from earth. Ie. Pillars of metal emerge from the ground, the user cups a small rock in his hands that shoots out as a spear when thrown. It's just to have a defined limit in terms of scale. A water user can simply generate enough water to cause a giant wave without some sort of source large enough like a river or the water beneath the earth, etc.

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Jutsu Name::Kinton Bunshin no Jutsu(Metal Release Clone Technique)
Jutsu Type::Supplementary
Jutsu Affinity:: Kinton
Jutsu Description::Using the Metal Release KKG, the member of the Hagane clan creates clones of themselves made out of metal. The increased defense the metal bodies provide, make them harder to destroy. The clones are capable of performing Kinton jutsu only because their body is made of metal themselves and can manipulate it into simple forms of weapons and provides a base for other attacks through the original user.

Considering clones only have a fraction of the user's original strength does that mean attacks used in conjunction with clones aren't as strong as if the user used them directly?

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Jutsu Name::Melted Sensation
Jutsu Type::Offensive/Supplementary
Jutsu Affinity:: Kinton
Jutsu Description::using the Metal Release KKG, the member of the Hagane clan heats their metals to the melting point and then casts the liquid metal at people or objects. Once the liquid metal lands, it hardens and creates a metal cocoon that only a Hagane or high temperature flame can melt.
I'm not going to allow this technique on its own. It's like a Water user freezing a water source and manipulating it as Ice despite not having an Affinity to ice.
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Re: Hagane Clan

Post by Raikage on Mon Jul 14, 2014 6:11 am

"What TWO elements are fused to create Kinton? I'm assuming one is Earth. Also I forgot to add this onto the template at first but could you add Jutsu Rank to your techniques. The Template has been updated if you'd like to review it."
  • This clan doesn't actually use elements at all in their metal manipulation, it is strictly the KKG ability of their body. If you think it would be better to use elements to make it sound more plausible, then I guess Doton & Katon would be the two elements used to create the clan's ability.


This seems similar to Suigetsu's Hydration Technique. You'll have to expand on this ability using the Jutsu Template. It'll immediately be an S-Rank/Forbidden technique thus will have limited use and negative affects upon the user. Can't have the user turning into metal anytime they wanted, it'd make them virtually indestructable. You may however have shaping limbs into various weapons, but only as a separate lower leveled techique.
  • It can be viewed akin to Suigetsu's hydrification technique, I'm not sure how to mean "expand on the ability with jutsu template" Do you want me to make a transformation jutsu for each individual rank? As for the S-Rank/Forbidden technique of whole metal body- Does this mean one will need Kinjutsu to use?


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Genin: Capable of eating/manipulating forms up to Silver
Chuunin: Capable of eating/manipulating forms up to Bronze
SPC/Jounin: Capable of eating/manipulating forms up to Platinum
ANBU Black-Ops: Capable of eating/manipulating forms up to Titanium
Sannin: Capable of eating/manipulating forms up to Hardened Steel
Kage: Capable of eating/manipulating forms up to Tungsten Carbide
Why do you have specific types of metal for each rank instead of just keeping it simple ie. Can manipulate Metal, the more chakra imbued the stronger the metal? Is it just for aesthetic reasons? Cause I see you need to be higher ranked to use Silver but for Bronze which is physically stronger you only need to be genin.
  • I actually based the levels of hardness off of a graph I found on google, but I guess it could have been mistaken. I can remove the specific metals and just ad a "hardness" level to each individual rank, sound better?


Spoiler:
Jutsu Name::Tansetsu no Jutsu (Forge Wielding technique)
Jutsu Type::Offensive/Supplementary
Jutsu Affinity:: Kinton
Jutsu Description::Using the Metal Release KKG, the Hagane clan can generate any weapon and armor shape and size(Maximum of 20ft length & 5ft width) from their body; whether being separate from their body or part of their body. This jutsu can also be used to repair other broken or damaged weapons. Granted the weapons are limited to how well one can manipulate the metals.

I'll allow being able to produce metal but it'll be better and more practical if it has to be from earth. Ie. Pillars of metal emerge from the ground, the user cups a small rock in his hands that shoots out as a spear when thrown. It's just to have a defined limit in terms of scale. A water user can simply generate enough water to cause a giant wave without some sort of source large enough like a river or the water beneath the earth, etc.
  • How about A Rank & Higher jutsu need an outside source of metal to use the jutsu? A water user can mold their chakra into water for jutsu, so I figure my clan could as well- simply converting their chakra with the metal inside their body to perform said jutsu.


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Jutsu Name::Kinton Bunshin no Jutsu(Metal Release Clone Technique)
Jutsu Type::Supplementary
Jutsu Affinity:: Kinton
Jutsu Description::Using the Metal Release KKG, the member of the Hagane clan creates clones of themselves made out of metal. The increased defense the metal bodies provide, make them harder to destroy. The clones are capable of performing Kinton jutsu only because their body is made of metal themselves and can manipulate it into simple forms of weapons and provides a base for other attacks through the original user.


Considering clones only have a fraction of the user's original strength does that mean attacks used in conjunction with clones aren't as strong as if the user used them directly?
  • Physically they'd be just as strong as my character and be able to use a simple jutsu such as changing their body parts into weapons- jutsu used in conjunction with the original would be on the same scale as regular jutsu, because the original would use their metal bodies for the medium of their attacks(Such as making one of the metal bodies explode into senbon needles)


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Jutsu Name::Melted Sensation
Jutsu Type::Offensive/Supplementary
Jutsu Affinity:: Kinton
Jutsu Description::using the Metal Release KKG, the member of the Hagane clan heats their metals to the melting point and then casts the liquid metal at people or objects. Once the liquid metal lands, it hardens and creates a metal cocoon that only a Hagane or high temperature flame can melt.

I'm not going to allow this technique on its own. It's like a Water user freezing a water source and manipulating it as Ice despite not having an Affinity to ice.
  • I see your point- but from a scientific standpoint- water has a constant temperature and requires effort to "freeze' As opposed to the metal which would already be heated up, would only be doing what it naturally does as melting temperature and cooling down: cooling down hardens it, no extra process to consider such as water-> conversion.

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Re: Hagane Clan

Post by Rogue Akiyo on Mon Jul 14, 2014 8:21 am

I think her clan is similar to the kaguya's clan. They have a special kKG ability limited to them without the use actually combining to chakra natures. They manipulate metal, just as kaguya's manipulate bones.

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Post by Daisuke on Mon Jul 14, 2014 10:28 am

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It can be viewed akin to Suigetsu's hydrification technique, I'm not sure how to mean "expand on the ability with jutsu template" Do you want me to make a transformation jutsu for each individual rank? As for the S-Rank/Forbidden technique of whole metal body- Does this mean one will need Kinjutsu to use?
Just Basically make it a Jutsu rather than mentioning it briefly is what I meant. Also Anything similar to the hydration jutsu is banned, it's basically auto dodge if you can completely turn into an element. It can also make a character near invincible, unless you explain the jutsu in detail of course.

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I actually based the levels of hardness off of a graph I found on google, but I guess it could have been mistaken. I can remove the specific metals and just ad a "hardness" level to each individual rank, sound better?
Yep that sounds fine

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How about A Rank & Higher jutsu need an outside source of metal to use the jutsu? A water user can mold their chakra into water for jutsu, so I figure my clan could as well- simply converting their chakra with the metal inside their body to perform said jutsu.
That's a fair point but then there's no need to mention this as a jutsu on it's own if they can form metal using the Kinton chakra. It was mainly the whole generalization of what they can form that had me worried. Rather than saying they can create weapons and that they vary in size, etc. It'd be better if you had specific jutsu for specific weapons and armors so then the size, strength and that could be dependant on the Rank, if you get what I mean.

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Physically they'd be just as strong as my character and be able to use a simple jutsu such as changing their body parts into weapons- jutsu used in conjunction with the original would be on the same scale as regular jutsu, because the original would use their metal bodies for the medium of their attacks(Such as making one of the metal bodies explode into senbon needles)
Having them phyically as strong as your char makes sense because they are made of metal unlike Shadow clones, But then much like shadow clones their jutsu would be weaker, as your character's power is being spread across all the clone right?

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I see your point- but from a scientific standpoint- water has a constant temperature and requires effort to "freeze' As opposed to the metal which would already be heated up, would only be doing what it naturally does as melting temperature and cooling down: cooling down hardens it, no extra process to consider such as water-> conversion.
So then is all the metal that users produce originally molten but solidifies once produced, to for instance form weapon shapes and such? If so does it mean you can only control molten metal until it solidifies? The way it is on this site, you can have a character that can use Ice techniques for instance but once it melts they can't use Suiton techs unless they have two affinities at the time. An Ice user can't use Water, and a Molten Metal user can't use Solid Metal unless melted down, assuming they use molten metal of course

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I think her clan is similar to the kaguya's clan. They have a special kKG ability limited to them without the use actually combining to chakra natures. They manipulate metal, just as kaguya's manipulate bones.
Kaguya apparently infuse their calcium with chakra, hence why they can manipulate their bones
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